These are really great Angela! The only thing I have to say is that I think you need a panel after the first one to show the audience what she's looking at. So I guess add a drawing of the wreck right there. The way you have it now looks like she's looking at the bird crowd, if that makes sense. :/ It looks really good and the last drawing is really cute.
These are really great Angela! The only thing I have to say is that I think you need a panel after the first one to show the audience what she's looking at. So I guess add a drawing of the wreck right there. The way you have it now looks like she's looking at the bird crowd, if that makes sense. :/ It looks really good and the last drawing is really cute.
ReplyDeleteCute! Showing her thinking helps a lot with adding tension and defining her character. :)
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