Notes from September 28

Here are the notes from last week. I'm sorry for posting it so late. I've been really busy.

Rebecca:

Use two tentacles when drawing the square.
Make the sponge bigger.
After the ink, don't have him look up, make his eye half lid.

Nick:

Have 2 star fish in the lasso scene.
Have the first bird swoop down.
The octopus ducks.
Then the main bird scoops down.
And then he tries to lasso her.

For the swing shot:
Show one point of the rock. Then truck up
Have one tentacle latch on.
Show other point.
He latches on.


When he's falling have him come down in the water and pass the camera to off screen. Then have him come back into screen and see the whale.

With the whale scene, have him flying up looking happy and determined.

Myself:
The starfish is too much of a tangent.
Have the starfish get snatched
Then you see the tentacles building
Then out to the starfish with a bow
Then have the blow fish laughing at the starfish (blowing up while he laughs)
Then grabbed by the octopus etc.
Have the blow fish and octopus fall into the water and then comes up with the sting ray

Karsen:
When he comes up with the sting ray, have a "what the" expression but goes with it.
Push the staging with the octopus more.
When he's thinking have him use all arms with different poses. One scratching his head, one holding his chin, etc.

Angela:
Move Move the panel so we see what she's seeing. Have her want to go into the water, but doesn't like it.
Then sees the jelly fish and go in.
Really push the hug by having him hug her with all arms and really squeezing her
Have an aquatic transition at the end after you show the bird and the octopi.

Kay that's it. Sorry it's late again. Keep up the good work everyone.