Class notes from October 12th

Rebecca:
Have some breathing space for clarity with the group of birds. If need to, have a closer shot to show the gag.

When they're talking, have bubbles come out.

Nick:
Play with the star fish pose smoking more. Start off with a close up of him, and then zoom out to the octopus grabbing him.

Have a drawing of her reacting/being happy/squaking at seeing hte star fish.

Invert the placement of the starfish when the octopus puts him down

Test with the sound if you should show the slap or not.

Make the dolphin look like he's really trying to pull on the starfish

Watch the placement of the octopus an the whale (add bubbles to show him swimming in and out),

Change the configuration of the octopus flying so it's vertical.

Add action lines when needed.

Myself:
Have a long pan with bubbles going one way and then going the other way faster.

Push the bird away further from the blow fish in the first scene.

Draw octopus falling n bigger paper.

Karsen:
When the octopus is watching the hang glider person falling, have him watch, and then another panel of him grabbing the hang glider tightly for deer life.

At a point, you don't need the other jelly fish. Have the bird hit the plane. Have him shake his head. And then the other fish falls off.

Angela:

Rather than have the bird stick her toe in. Have her look around frantically for the octopus. Have her put her head down in the water. Sees him. Comes out and gasp. Looks around and finds the jelly fish and put it on.

Instead of having the octopus shake of the shell, have him present the clam as if he's presenting the pearl like a ring box.

Add one more long shot at the very end.

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