Tuesday, November 23, 2010

November 23 Notes

  • Add seagull gag sound, laughing sounds
  • Have a close up of the starfish choking
  • Cross dissolve from "awwww" view of her to him
  • sneaker bird sounds
  • take the song longer by a stanza or so.
  • extend dream moment at least 2x or 3 longer
  • start closer with the camera when she's winking and then zoom out.
  • Fade out is a bit too fast from Rebecca's scene to nick's
  • Pan up the rock
  • start with the start fish
  • see the tentacle then add the smack (have A and B drawings)
  • Fash woshing sounds (similiar to someone grabbing things quickly), when he's reaching for the bird.
  • A and B drawings when he's falling
  • Panel of him talking to the whale-have him make sounds as if he's talking
  • Add more blahs when the bird is talkingto the other bird
  • More sad time with the octopus (Karsen's scene)
  • Add music when the two are together on the plane
  • When the engine sound is going, have the screen shake
  • Fix the bird drawings to be more clear (airplane)
  • add missing frame from octopus passing out
  • Have woosh or flapping sound when she's fling by
  • Have bird cawing when she goes and attack the puffer fish
  • Extend bird talking shot
  • screams with octopus and glider
  • screaming swimmer
  • scary underwater sounds (shark chomps)
  • longer shots at octopus and bird plane
  • cross dissolve of faint
  • bird gasp before going under water
  • release of bubbles under water
  • snapping of jelly fish needs to be louder
  • zing/ding for reveal of pearl
  • kiss sound
  • record "mmm" for hug
  • scratch record idea at end
  • beautiful ending song
  • scratch record
  • "I Need You" song for credits

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